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Post by Draconorn on Mar 1, 2008 4:04:05 GMT
This isn't going in the story assistance thread because it's too big a thing.
Firstly, everyone who has a Hand character in DM5 needs to describe in DETAIL what their Hand's world is like.
Secondly, I need a more detailed description of all characters you've entered to be in DM5.
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Post by KC11 on Mar 1, 2008 5:22:47 GMT
Facts about KC11 you might not have known! Read below! She is a female, yet acts tomboyish. She hates being called stupid. Trust me. Never call her stupid. Back in DM2, she was killed when her soul was ripped from her body by a buggy warp. She was reincarnated as a human, and when through the events that happened in The Warp. Then, after The Warp and The Warp II, she was sucked back to this Dimension, whereas she had no idea where the heck she was. However, after a bit of exploring, she slowly started to remember, and slowly started forgetting her Earth life, to the point when, in DM5, she had completely forgotten about the buggy warp incident and acts very confused when someone mentions it to her. Sometimes, though, she has flashbacks back to her life on Earth, and often dreams about her life on Earth. KC11 has a hopeless crush on Danny (hope this is alright to add. If not, just ignore. I just think it would be funny if KC were always trying to convince Danny that his "no love, no sorrow" way of life wasn't the best way to live his life. ;D) KC11's last name is Laquir. She has a family. A BIG family. They all live with her in her world, Draconius. So if you ever come to her world, expect to be glomped by about... 12 or 13 happy dragons! A few facts about them worth noting: All the KC's are females. The only male in the family is the youngest, Edward. KC11's oldest sister, KC1, is huge. Even for a dragon. She's very friendly, yet shy, and people are often frightened of her, which she hates. KC11's second oldest sister, KC2, is dead. She was an avid shapeshifter, and eager to show off her powers. One day, a cat came to her and challenged her to shift into a number of forms, including a mouse. When KC2 became a mouse, the cat ate her and took her cave for his house. It was a great blow to the Laquir family. KC9 is the only self proclaimed lesbian dragon in existence! (Is that alright to add? ) KC11 has had an ongoing feud with KC8, so don't expect her to be in the caves. KC8 is prejudice against dark creatures, especially dark dragons, and KC11 likes to treat everyone equally. KC11 had a sister, Viara [(c) Evilspirit] who, due to a mutation, was born a dark dragon. Several dragons teased her and shunned her, so one day she ran away. KC8 said that this was the best way of weeding out "lesser" genes in the gene pool, and called Viara the worst name anyone could call a dragon. KC11, who was nearby, went into a rage and attacked KC8. Then she and her triplet sister, Safire, ran away. Several years later, KC11 returned to her family. Safire has still not been found. KC4, KC5, KC7, KC9, and Edward are all shapeshifters, like KC11. KC11 does not consider herself to be a hand. She will always consider herself to be a dragon. World Description: KC11 lives in a world called Draconius. Draconius is a world mostly populated by fallow and draconian norns, with a few bengels thrown in for variety. The world has been around for a very long time, and continued even after KC's death in DM2. Some pretty interesting breeds have developed, including fallows that can fly and breath ice. KC happens to love these little fallows, and has several thousand in her world. KC has so many norns in her world that there is no need for inbreeding. Not that they don't still do it, the little buggers. KC's world is dragon themed. It is a huge valley with lots of caves in the two mountain ranges around it. In the valley lies a huge forest, with all sorts of lakes and wildlife. KC and her family live in the Top Mountain, the mountain that marks the end of their world. They live at the very top, where they can watch all that goes on in their world. KC's cave goes all through the mountain, although the enterance lies at the top of the mountain. There are all sorts of burrows and rooms everywhere. There has to be a lot, as the Laquirs are a very extended family. People have found that they get lost in the Laquir's cave, and pray to Gai that they meet Jesten to help them along the way instead of Demetris (who's idea of helping is smashing them on the head with a baseball bat and stuffing them in a pot). Yes, Jesten and Demetris live here too. They often walk randomly around the Laquir's cave. Trust me. When you are lost in the Laquir's cave, you want to run into Jesten. Not Demetris. Unless of course you have a hard head and you can't fit into the average pot, even with some squashing. That's all I can think of now. I'll post more when it comes to me.
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Post by Draconorn on Mar 1, 2008 7:17:28 GMT
Thanks. That'll be helpful for DM2 as well
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Post by Grendel Man on Mar 1, 2008 7:37:20 GMT
Ho boy.
Anyway, here's Tropicagren's description:
Tropicagren is a spherical rainforest world, with only a one ocean (well, it's more of a lake). The sky's always overcast, and the sun is usually never seen. Sprinkles are common, and an all-out thunderstorm is something that occurs rather frequently. The temperature is always hovering around 40-50 degrees, and is always cool.
Major landforms such as mountains are lacking, and all available ground is covered by rainforest. Most of the animal life reflects that, and it is home to various big cats, reptiles, and the like.
GM's hut isn't very visible, although it is very large. It is constructed of branches and leaves, blending in perfectly with the surroundings, but inside it looks very much like a mansion.
The army has no housing, it wanders around the planet, living off the land.
That's it for the world, and now for a little bit about GM:
Grendel Man became a hand after he slew himself while still a human. For reasons unexplained, while his spirit was undergoing the transformation into a hand, it got fused with a jungle (C3) grendel, thus rendering him half-grendel. This has advantages, but also has weaknesses. The major weakness is that, while GM still will live for a very long time, he is mortal and will die eventually. Also, the half-grendel nature also forces grendel features into most forms GM takes besides his usual five (half-human, half-grendel; grendel/moth; ice dragon; snowy owl; and human).
I'm not going into the army, because that's gonna take up a mother load of space.
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Post by Draconorn on Mar 1, 2008 7:44:24 GMT
Thanks, that'll be handy.
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Mistress of the Realm of Over There!
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Post by Sfot on Mar 1, 2008 12:01:18 GMT
Over There is a rather strange place to be; it's more like several realms linked together by the strange warp system Sfot has set up. Think the Ghost Zone merged with the Realms of Insanity.
There are vast areas dedicated to the collection of pencil stubs, paper clips, sandwiches ((for some bizzare reason)) and the like. There's a reason for that; Over There has become somewhat important as it's somehow become resposible for all those things that vanish and turn up randomly. Like dust.
The rest of it, though, is full of planets and such on which life has a habbit of looking like Sfot has pulled it out of a computer game. She often has; some areas full of Heros of Might and Magic creatures, one planet Black and White 2, another Dungon Keeper 2.
Sfot, Fibre, Ssod and all other creations know their way around well, and are always willing to help anbody new to the place, or in some cases, direct anybody they don't particuly like into the area reserved for pins/dust.
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Post by Savverz on Mar 4, 2008 4:53:02 GMT
Phew, details? This is gonna kill me... Now, I'm not sure how many of these characters will be accepted into the story, but I figured I'd better write a bit more about them anyway. More about Maraha: As many already know, she's a shapeshifter. Due to several major errors when Sheoth, Contra, and Rxibot (c) Bystander42 :P) she lost the ability to shapeshift into anything at will, and is instead limited to her more common forms: creepy zombie cyborg, white wyvern (with gold and silver markings), brown horse (dragon wings, fiery mane, monicles on both eyes, snakes wrapped around legs), dark knight (description in the RPG section), human (The usual. :P Brown eyes/hair, black bucket hat, red trenchcoat over white t-shirt, black pants and black sandals with white socks), and maybe a few others that I really can't remember right now. :/ She's several thousands of years old and cannot remember the first hundred years of her life, nor her life as a regular non-hand human. She has a strong maternal instinct, which, although it is hard to believe, is true. Her human form usually looks around 14-16 years old, and when it doesn't, it's around 18-22. She isn't quite as insane as she used to be, ever since the Realms were destroyed and Insanity went missing she's more sane than ever before, but that won't stop her from trying to splice Danny with a duck. ;D Eh, what more is there to say? I know I'm missing something... oh well. :/ More about Contra: She can't die of age, thanks to an ancient artifact given to her by her parents shortly before they died. She keeps the artifact - which looks like a green tear-shaped crystal - with her at all times. Usually locked in a tiny little box which she keeps in her pocket or backpack or whatever she may be using at the time. She's more than two thousand years old, and can remember her past clearly, much to her dismay. She cannot be burned by intense sunlight, nor can she be weakened by pure shadow. She is usually wearing jewelry made from crystallized tears, such as earrings and bracelets. She keeps her long silver hair tied up in a ponytail with a string of crystal tears, even. She, in case any of you didn't know, adores Danny as a son, and has a bad habit of putting herself between him and some vile enemy's blade despite the fact that Danny can't die again. At first, she seemed to hate Maraha, but after a thousand years with her in Insanity City, she learned to better understand Maraha and to tolerate her with her many faults. Another thing, she and Aaron do love each other. Aaron, being so incredibly over-protective and jealous and such, tends to cause great bodily harm to any admirers, unless specifically told not to by Contra. :P Hmm, hope I'm not forgetting anything here either. :/ More about Lucille: Contra and Aaron's child. Lucille is incredibly shy around just about everybody, especially Danny, whom she has a major crush on. (Danny's popular. XD) She's a young teenager, and despite her kind yet quiet personality, she can be rebellious in her own way. (Lucille: :O Hey mum, I want to be a human! (XD)) She doesn't have spikes on her grendelish limbs, and actually looks rather thin and delicate for a Grenorn. Unlike her mother, she can be hurt from intense sunlight and pure shadows, which she figured out the hard way. :P Contrary to popular belief, she does not have any sort of obsession with couches. XD Oh, one last thing that I can remember, she usually gives Danny yellow roses with red-tipped petals, which is her way of telling him how she feels. Yellow roses with red-tipped petals means something like 'Friendship turning into Love' kinda thing, I think. But Danny doesn't seem to be very familiar of the Language of Flowers, does he? Poor Lucille, in love with an oblivious boy, eh? ;D More about... um... who else? X( *Thinks hard* :O Vladimarco!? ... No... I can't think of anything much right now when it comes to characters... Edit: More about Rein, of course! Rein is Aaron's adopted son, found in some ancient ruins in the forest near Aaron's castle. Rein looks a little like the average brown-striped yellow Lombax, but with bright blue eyes and the mark of the damned, a strange upside-down blue tear on his left cheek. He also wears a little silver cuff on his left ear, implying that the terrible thing he was doomed to suffer had already happened. At night his eyes may occasionally change from blue to red, especially nearing the full moon. During the full moon, however, he changes shape completely. After being kidnapped by a couple of deranged mad scientists and expiremented on, he was spliced with a 'Ross' Turaco', a bird commonly found in several worlds inside the Realm. Eh... More in a while. Maraha's World - Roia: Roia is somewhat similar to a slightly younger Earth when it comes to it's variety in habitats. Time also goes faster in Roia compared to Malurien, which would explain why so many of my characters grow up so fast. XD Many jungles, rain forests, deserts, savannahs (*giggles*), and several beautifully green meadows. The Deserts are usually devoid of all fauna except for a hand ful of fiery foxes, bloodthirsty lizards, and giant killer bugs. Plants in the desert are rare, but long-lasting and hardy. Plants like cacti or spider grass are the most common. The rarest plant in the desert is the Desert Rose, a single flower which appears and disappears regularly, often reappearing in a different spot from before. It looks withered and dead on the outside, but when in full bloom the withered petals open up to reveal a beautiful white flower. It blooms the day before the rainy season, when almost all hope is lost for the creatures. The jungles/rain forests are home to tiger-like dragons, tribal norns, grendels and lombaxes, and many many many insects, among other things. The most common insect other than bugs such as ants and beetles, is the giant 'Ecto-Moth', a kind of moth said to be completely ectoplasmic, yet has no powers the average ectoplasmic creature would. The tiger-like Dragons are not sentient, yet are still incredibly intelligent and excellent predators, every jungle norn/grendel/lombax's worst nightmare. :P Most forests are rather mystical places, home to delicate little creatures like faeries and gnomes. There are many different kinds of flowers in said forests, flowers like pansies, tansies, and every other kind of 'ansies' you could think of. ;D Oi, more to come later. XD
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Post by Draconorn on Mar 4, 2008 4:53:19 GMT
Oh yeah, if anyone has ideas I can use feel free to mention them 'cuz I'm stuck ._.
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Post by Savverz on Mar 4, 2008 5:09:02 GMT
Running gags! You need a running gag involving marshmallow chocobos/cockatrices. o3o
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Post by KC11 on Mar 4, 2008 5:14:27 GMT
Hmmm....
Well, there needs to be a new monster... of sorts. Something that terrorizes the land and forces people to different creatures worlds to hide. Then there should be a murder. A mysterious murder. And everyone thinks the good guy did it.
Yes, I'm in a murderous mood. Why did you ask?
On a serious note:
Hmm, considering it's called "Riding the Storm", maybe there should be some sort of.... species persecution. I don't know. "Riding the Storm" always sounds like resisting persecution to me. :/
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Post by Draconorn on Mar 4, 2008 5:17:18 GMT
D: *stabs at writer's block angrily*
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Post by Savverz on Mar 4, 2008 5:49:59 GMT
I think the eggs in mah sammiches were rotten! D: I'm going to die....! They were rubbery and green around the yolk... DX
On topic:
o3o The story should have Aaron and Contra's wedding it it, 'cause that'd be awsh, IMO.
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Post by Draconorn on Mar 4, 2008 6:39:54 GMT
I could put that in... *continues to stab writer's block*
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Post by Savverz on Mar 4, 2008 6:58:31 GMT
I could put that in... *continues to stab writer's block* I'm so happy I could just explode! ... The altmer women in Oblivion like to say that a lot... o,,o;
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Post by KC11 on Mar 4, 2008 21:00:55 GMT
Oh, forgot to mention:
KC11 loves animals. She knows a lot about different animals from studying them. She knows how they act, what they are called, and she even has names for some of them. She also knows a lot about animal genetics. Especially norn genetics.
Also, when she has a crush on someone, she isn't too outward about it. She tries to be subtle, even though the fact that she has a crush on someone is written plainly on her face for all to study. DX. She knows when she is going to far with "flirting", but because of her stubborn nature, she'll always come back. When she is not trying to get Danny to rebuke his "no love, no sorrow" policy, she is actually very natural and friendly towards him. Such moments are rare, though. At all other times, she is over friendly and not so natural. Eventually, she thinks this might not be the best of policys, but it's a bit too late by that time.
And about the KC's: The KCs from KC1-KC5 are adult dragons. KC1, KC3, and KC5 all have their own dragonlings. KC6-KC11 are all teens, and some have their own kids as well. Dragons, being dragons, don't really have a law that says that teens can't mate. Dragons also don't understand "love before attempted mating", as they usually meet their mates on mating flights, and when they find a mate, the two don't get to know each other for a few years before having some dragonlings of their own. In this way, KC11 and Safire are very different from normal dragons. This is most attributed to the fact that they both stay in human form for long periods of time, and so the instincts of humans have seemed to have leaked into their brains. Because of all this, none of the KC's with offspring have their mates anymore, as they chose poorly.
KC2 also had a few children. They were taken in by the other KCs.
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Post by Grendel Man on Mar 21, 2008 7:38:11 GMT
I haveth an idea! Although I'm not sure if you ever played Final Fantasy VII, I'm sure you've heard about the infamous Sephiroth. Perhaps you could throw him in the DM stories somewhere.
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Post by Draconorn on Mar 22, 2008 20:39:54 GMT
I've played FFX and I've wanted to see the FFVII movie, but I've never played it. That's a good idea though, I'll Wiki it and see what I can do :3
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Post by KC11 on Mar 22, 2008 23:24:57 GMT
how many dm books are you doing, out of curiosity? Is this the last one or will there be a dm 6 and 7?
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Post by Savverz on Mar 23, 2008 1:11:31 GMT
how many dm books are you doing, out of curiosity? Is this the last one or will there be a dm 6 and 7? KC, NOOOO!!!! *Universe implodes, then explodes, rinse, lather, repeat* ...
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Post by KC11 on Mar 23, 2008 1:28:48 GMT
>_>;
What did I do??!!
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