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Post by Draconorn on Nov 24, 2007 1:52:08 GMT
That's cool! It's not cliche, don't worry.
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Post by Ember Lee on Nov 24, 2007 6:00:39 GMT
Man, all of your stories a good! (that's to ALL of you by the way). I wish I could get back to writing my stories, I've got MAJOR writer's block. It's last 2months now!!! I'm pulling my hair out! I'm in that bit where the main plot has been told, and they're travelling across a LARge desert on the way to a small town called.....*problem number1* and they're going to....*prob2* before Calyn dies. Calyn is a girl in my story who has two vultures following her. Her twin brother Phinoe and her bestfriend Tressera are with her, along with Aisha and Aidain. They're looking for thier fathers who have been seperated from the famous Chaingang DewSaga* and are stranded somewhere in the desert with no supplies. *sigh* Now I'm stuck.
*They're archaeologists by the way no criminals
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Post by KC11 on Nov 25, 2007 3:37:56 GMT
Town Name: Juna, Julinkay, Masuna, Lumbida.....
Any particular style you want for the town name?
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Post by Officer 1BDI on Nov 28, 2007 16:38:01 GMT
Guys, I need your opinion on something that's been bugging me since last night:
In terms of fanfiction, is it too convenient to ignore what happens in canon by saying that it happened on an alternate timeline and therefore shouldn't affect your fan story at all?
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Post by Sfot on Nov 28, 2007 16:46:49 GMT
No. It is never a bad idea to use alternate dimensions or set a fanfiction before some episodes air.
After all, everybody else does it at fanfiction.net so why not?
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Post by Officer 1BDI on Nov 28, 2007 21:34:39 GMT
But I don't want to be like everyone else at ff.net! D:
Actually, I have a bigger problem; if my theory's correct, then the story I'm working on actually has two versions: one version for each "timeline." Which version am I supposed to go with?!
You know which version you're going to go with....
But then I'd be using the "alternate timeline" excuse!
...They're both alternate timelines you dolt!
*headdesk* I'll figure it out eventually. Thanks for the input, Sfot.
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Post by Ember Lee on Dec 4, 2007 5:53:55 GMT
I've given up on my desert story. Keeping the characters, tossing the plot line. Now they're in a horror called Faces. Coming to a bookstore near you....in the distant future.....
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Post by Grendel Man on Dec 6, 2007 23:14:56 GMT
Yesterday, I came up with a new story plot bunny idea.
The story will be called "Raptors," and its main characters are 5 dinosaurs-a Velociraptor, a Deinonychus, a Utahraptor, a Troodon, and an Oviraptor-who, by mysterious means, find themselves in the Present Day.
The Velociraptor's name is Whitetip, but I'm having trouble coming with the other 4 names for the dinosaurs. Any suggestions?
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Post by KC11 on Dec 7, 2007 1:21:46 GMT
Moonshone?
Rascin?
Ja' Hark?
Longtail?
Longtooth?
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Post by Sfot on Dec 15, 2007 13:21:27 GMT
I've become the target of another plot bunny after looking at Fanfictions Creatures section. Just over a page's worth of stories, none of which have been updated recently.
The plot bunny is a weird one, too. Somehow, a human girl, 16 maybe, somehow ends up on a shee ship and the only guy who seems normal to her is weird to his fellow shee as "He's a deep thinker. Sure, it's unimportant stuff he thinks about, but it's deep and that 'coffee' stuff he came up with is actully not that bad..."
So yeah. Anybody got any ideas or sugestions for stuff like names, how she get's there, what she actully does?....Please?
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Post by Ember Lee on Dec 16, 2007 2:32:43 GMT
No sorry. I was frustrated to findout there's already a book called 'Faces' and that it's about a fourteen year old boy as well. So now mine's called 'Phizog Faces'
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Post by Officer 1BDI on Dec 16, 2007 2:36:20 GMT
Well... in 2012 the HANDs use the Warp to jump from Earth to Albia and back again, but that story takes place at a time when space travel is virtually nonexistant (for the Humans, at least) so the Warp was really my only sensible option. I'm not the first author to use it (or something similar), and I'm sure I'm not going to be the last, and it's already well-established in the game, so there's an idea. I have no idea about names, though.
If you don't want to use a wormhole, though, maybe she has her own ship (depending on when/where you're setting this story)?
Speaking of 2012, I'm going to spend tomorrow just throwing around ideas for the middle of the story. I've been spending too much time focusing on the beginning and the ending, and I really need to revisit the heart of the story before it falls apart even further. Maybe I'll actually come up with a proper title this time....
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Post by Draconorn on Dec 17, 2007 1:57:37 GMT
For DM5, though I'm not up to writing it, I think Jago/Anti-Jak (who's truly a good guy) should do something special but I don't know what. I was thinking that he could sacrifice his own life to save someone else, but then I'd miss having him around in the story )':
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Post by Sfot on Dec 17, 2007 16:54:19 GMT
Distract Anti-Drac long enough to let whoever sneak up on her, plung their hand through her neck and rip out spine/ribcage and beat her to death and then her remains to a bloody pulp with it. >D
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Post by Draconorn on Dec 17, 2007 21:51:29 GMT
Ummm... that's DIMENSION 4 you're thinking of... I've already planned what's happening for that X3
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Post by Grendel Man on Dec 18, 2007 0:16:16 GMT
DM 5? Have Anti-Jak distract Makuta, who should be acting as a "superweapon" for GM's army.
In fact, I've got a whole plan for the GM/Malurienite final conflict, or at least its start:
It goes like this: The fight begins when GM's army, much larger than Malurien's army, completely surrounds the Malurien Army. Then GM shouts "MALURIENITES! TONIGHT, YOU DINE IN HELL!" (or something along those lines). After that, the Bohrok (haven't mentioned them being a part of GM's army, but they are because of Makuta), charge first.
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Post by Draconorn on Dec 19, 2007 8:01:09 GMT
Lolly, Hell X3 Well, you can give me hand with the DM5 battle if you want. But don't be TOO biased There'll be ton of other bad guys too, in a sort of evil alliance type thing. And Danny joins them for a short while because his evil half takes over D':
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Post by Grendel Man on Dec 20, 2007 0:49:31 GMT
Nah, I won't get biased. I just make it...more interesting.
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Post by Draconorn on Dec 20, 2007 7:37:49 GMT
<_<;
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Post by Sfot on Dec 29, 2007 21:33:47 GMT
Some lyrics I heard had given me another plot-bunny. Seriously, those things have cameras watching me 24/7. That's not relevant, though. Do please post comments/ critizim.
It'll become either a oneshot or a full story. So, here it is. ------------------------------------------------------ Some said she was a dancer on broken glass, others said she was just mental. But nobody knew her well enough to know. After all, those who went in search of her never returned. Most doubted they'd even made it a quarter of the journey. They were wrong.
The few hopefuls who went to find the Mistress and Goddess of the realm didn't even make it the end of the first eight. Mind you, they didn't know how. Nobody did. Which was why more and more young men who were barely adults went off to find the woman in charge, in hope of treasure, a wife and position as the realms God, or their hearts desire. None returned.
The Goddess' name is Anonlia, and she is said to be a beauty. She is, but in a strange way. Her hair is a pale brown, her eyes grey as clouds ready to give rain. Her skin is typical for Goddess; pale and absolutely flawless. Her robes were white. Her apperance was stunning, and her crown looks like clouded glass.
But the Goddesss Anonlia is dieing, and only one can replace her. And twelve year old Emma is unaware of her fate, thinking that the best she can hope for in life was for somebody to get her out of her home, before she was thrown out by her father for good.
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